开头句式
好的开头能吸引读者,以下是几种常见方式:
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自我介绍型
- I am...(我是……)
例句:I am a student from Sunshine Primary School. - My name is...(我的名字是……)
例句:My name is Lily. I am ten years old.
- I am...(我是……)
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时间背景型
- Today is...(今天是……)
例句:Today is Sunday. The weather is sunny. - It was...(那是……)
例句:It was a busy but happy day.
- Today is...(今天是……)
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提问引入型
- Do you know...?(你知道……吗?)
例句:Do you know how to make a snowman? - Have you ever...?(你曾经……过吗?)
例句:Have you ever been to the zoo?
- Do you know...?(你知道……吗?)
衔接句式
合理使用连接词能让文章更连贯,避免生硬跳跃。
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顺序连接词
- First,... Then,... Finally,...(………)
例句:First, wash the apples. Then, cut them into pieces. Finally, enjoy the fruit salad! - After that,...(之后……)
例句:We played football. After that, we had a picnic.
- First,... Then,... Finally,...(………)
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因果连接词
- Because...(因为……)
例句:I love spring because the flowers are beautiful. - So...(…)
例句:It was raining, so we stayed at home.
- Because...(因为……)
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转折连接词
- But...(…)
例句:I wanted to go swimming, but it was too cold. - However,...(…)
例句:She studied hard. However, she didn’t pass the test.
- But...(…)
描述句式
生动描述能让作文更精彩,以下是几种常见表达方式。
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外貌描写
- He/She has...(他/她有……)
例句:She has big eyes and long hair. - He/She is wearing...(他/她穿着……)
例句:He is wearing a blue T-shirt today.
- He/She has...(他/她有……)
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天气描写
- It is...(天气……)
例句:It is sunny and warm. - The sky is...(天空……)
例句:The sky is clear and blue.
- It is...(天气……)
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情感描写
- I feel...(我感觉……)
例句:I feel excited about the trip. - He/She looks...(他/她看起来……)
例句:She looks happy today.
- I feel...(我感觉……)
观点表达句式
写作时需清晰表达自己的想法,以下句式可帮助孩子准确输出观点。
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喜欢与不喜欢
- I like...(我喜欢……)
例句:I like playing basketball. - I don’t like...(我不喜欢……)
例句:I don’t like rainy days.
- I like...(我喜欢……)
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建议与看法
- I think...(我认为……)
例句:I think reading books is fun. - In my opinion,...(在我看来……)
例句:In my opinion, we should protect the environment.
- I think...(我认为……)
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愿望与计划
- I want to...(我想……)
例句:I want to be a doctor when I grow up. - I hope...(我希望……)
例句:I hope I can visit Paris one day.
- I want to...(我想……)
结尾句式
好的结尾能让文章更完整,给人留下深刻印象。
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总结感受
- I had a great time!(我玩得很开心!)
例句:We went to the park and I had a great time! - It was a wonderful day.(这是美好的一天。)
例句:We ate delicious food and played games. It was a wonderful day.
- I had a great time!(我玩得很开心!)
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表达期待
- I hope to... again.(我希望再次……)
例句:I hope to go camping again. - I can’t wait for...(我等不及……)
例句:I can’t wait for the next holiday.
- I hope to... again.(我希望再次……)
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呼吁行动
- Let’s... together!(让我们一起……!)
例句:Let’s protect our planet together! - Remember to...(记得……)
例句:Remember to smile every day.
- Let’s... together!(让我们一起……!)