雅思写作Task 1是许多考生容易忽视的部分,但它的分数占比与Task 2相同,掌握高效的结构模板,能帮助你在20分钟内快速组织语言,精准呈现数据,以下是经过高分考生验证的实用框架,结合官方评分标准(TA/CC/LR/GRA)设计,适用于线图、柱图、饼图、表格及流程图。
数据类图表通用结构(线/柱/饼/表)
开头段(Introduction) 核心特征**
避免直接抄题,用同义替换和句式转换点明图表主题及数据类型。
例句:
"The line graph illustrates changes in the proportion of renewable energy used in five European countries between 1990 and 2020."
→ "The graph presents a comparative analysis of renewable energy adoption rates across five European nations over three decades (1990-2020)."
高分技巧:
- 加入时间范围(如over a 30-year period)
- 概括数据类型(percentage/number of people/tonnes)
概述段(Overview)
2-3句总结核心趋势,不涉及具体数据
考官首先寻找是否识别出核心特征,这是TA(任务完成度)的关键。
例句(柱状图对比):
"Overall, Country A consistently dominated in energy production, while Country D showed the most significant growth. By contrast, the figures for Country B remained stable throughout the period."
必写要素:
- 最高/最低值(the highest/lowest proportion)
- 最大变化(the most dramatic increase/decline)
- 共性或差异(similar patterns/sharp contrasts)
细节段(Details Paragraphs)
分2段,按逻辑分组数据
避免按图表顺序逐条描述,需分类对比(如按时间、国家、类别)。
结构模板:
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时间段分组(适用于动态数据):
- 前期(1990-2000):趋势+关键数据
- 后期(2000-2020):转折点+对比
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类别分组(适用于静态数据):
- 最高值组:具体数据+比较
- 中间值组:相似性或差异
- 例外项:特殊波动或异常
例句(表格题):
"In terms of transportation emissions, private cars accounted for 45% of the total, nearly double the figure for public buses (23%). However, cycling contributed minimally at only 5%."
数据引用技巧:
- 用倍数(twice as much as / half of)替代重复百分比
- 加入幅度副词(slightly/steadily/sharply)
流程图与地图题专用模板
流程图(Process Diagram)
开头段:
"The diagram outlines the stages involved in the production of [product], from initial raw materials to final distribution."
核心段落:
- 分阶段描述:用被动语态(is collected, are crushed)
- 连接词链:
- 顺序:First, Subsequently, Once this is completed
- 分支:Alternatively, Meanwhile
例句(咖啡制作):
"After being harvested, the coffee beans are dried under sunlight for 48 hours, followed by roasting at 200°C. Meanwhile, the packaging materials are prepared separately."
地图题(Map Comparison)
开头段:
"The two maps depict the layout of Greenville town center in 1990 and 2020, highlighting major infrastructural developments."
核心段落:
- 新增设施:A new residential area was constructed to the north-west.
- 拆除或替换:The original post office was replaced by a shopping mall.
- 保留部分:The park remained unchanged in size but gained additional footpaths.
方位表达:
- Adjacent to / To the east of / In the vicinity of
词汇与语法提分点
动态数据必备词汇
- 上升:surge (急速), climb steadily, a moderate rise
- 下降:plummet (骤降), a gradual decline, dip slightly
- 波动:fluctuate wildly, remain volatile
静态对比高分表达
- 占比:constitute / make up / represent
- 比较:three times higher than / in stark contrast to
避免低级错误
- 时态统一:过去数据用一般过去时(was/were),预测用将来时(will rise)
- 主谓一致:The number of students increases(非increase)
- 冠词使用:the highest figure(特指),a significant increase(泛指)
实战案例:线图模板应用
** 1990-2020年某国三种能源消费比例变化
范文节选:
"The line graph compares the consumption rates of coal, natural gas, and solar power in a particular nation over three decades. Overall, while coal usage experienced a steady decline, solar energy saw exponential growth, overtaking natural gas by 2020...
In 1990, coal accounted for 70% of total energy use, far exceeding the other two sources. However, this figure dropped by half by 2010 due to stricter environmental policies. In contrast, solar power, which initially represented a mere 5%, surged to 40% in the final decade..."
雅思小作文的核心是精准与效率,通过模板固定框架,能将更多时间用于数据分析和语言润色,建议练习时限定18分钟,留2分钟检查语法,数据类题目重点训练趋势归纳能力,流程地图题则需熟悉空间与步骤逻辑,只要结构清晰、用词多样,7分并非难事。