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雅思小作文图表题高分模板与写作技巧

雅思写作Task 1要求考生在20分钟内完成一篇至少150词的图表描述,图表类型包括线图、柱状图、饼图、表格和流程图等,掌握标准化的写作结构和表达方式,能帮助考生快速组织语言,确保逻辑清晰、数据准确,以下是针对不同图表的高分模板和实用技巧。

雅思小作文图表题高分模板与写作技巧-图1

图表题核心写作结构

无论哪种图表,都应遵循四段式结构:

  1. 引言段(Introduction)

    • 改写题目,说明图表展示的内容。
    • 常用句式:
      The chart/graph/table illustrates/compares the changes in...
      The data provides information about...
      段(Overview)**
    • 提炼2-3个最显著的趋势或特征,不涉及具体数据。
    • 常用词汇:
      Overall, the most noticeable trend is...
      In general, there are significant differences between...
  2. 细节段1(Details Paragraph 1)

    选择关键数据分组描述,如最高值、最低值或转折点。

  3. 细节段2(Details Paragraph 2)

    补充对比或次要数据,确保覆盖所有信息。


五大图表类型专项模板

线图(Line Graph)

核心:描述趋势与波动

  • 趋势动词:increase steadily, plummet sharply, fluctuate moderately
  • 程度副词:slightly, dramatically, gradually
  • 模板例句
    The consumption of coal experienced a sharp decline from 2000 to 2010, dropping by approximately 40%.

柱状图(Bar Chart)

核心:比较与排名

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  • 比较句式
    Country A accounted for the highest proportion at 35%, while Country B ranked the lowest with only 5%.
  • 数据衔接词:Similarly, In contrast, By comparison

饼图(Pie Chart)

核心:比例分配

  • 比例表达
    The majority of energy (72%) was generated from fossil fuels, followed by renewables at 18%.
  • 避免重复:用account for, constitute, make up交替使用

表格(Table)

核心:横向与纵向对比

  • 分类描述
    In terms of urban areas, the literacy rate stood at 94%, nearly double that of rural regions (52%).

流程图(Process Diagram)

核心:步骤与被动语态

  • 流程动词:be transported to, be converted into, be distributed to
  • 连接词:Subsequently, Once this stage is completed

提升分数的7个细节技巧

  1. 数据准确性

    避免完全照抄题目数据,使用约数(about, approximately)或范围(from...to...)。

  2. 时态一致性

    过去时间用一般过去时,预测数据用将来时或情态动词(is projected to, may reach)。

  3. 避免主观评价

    雅思小作文图表题高分模板与写作技巧-图3

    不写“I think”或“This is surprising”,仅客观陈述。

  4. 多样化表达

    替换重复词汇,如“increase”可替换为rise, grow, climb。

  5. 逻辑连接词

    使用However, Meanwhile, In addition确保段落连贯。

  6. 单位与量词

    明确标注单位(tonnes, percentage points),避免歧义。

  7. 结尾简洁

    雅思小作文图表题高分模板与写作技巧-图4

    无需总结段,最后一句自然收尾即可。


常见错误与修正案例

❌ 错误示范:
The sales went up a lot.(模糊表述)
✅ 修正后:
The sales rose significantly from £2m to £5m between 2015 and 2020.

❌ 错误示范:
People like using mobile phones more.(主观推测)
✅ 修正后:
Mobile phone usage increased by 67% during the period.


实战案例解析

The line graph below shows changes in car ownership per household in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

高分范文节选
The graph illustrates how the number of cars per household in the UK changed over a 30-year period. Overall, two-car households became increasingly common, while households without cars saw a steady decline.

In 1975, nearly 50% of households had no car. However, this figure dropped to just 25% by 2005. Meanwhile, the proportion of one-car families remained relatively stable at around 40%. The most striking change was in two-car ownership, which tripled from 10% to 30% during the same timeframe.

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