雅思写作Task 1(图表作文)是许多考生感到棘手的部分,尤其是面对数据类图表时,如何精准描述趋势、对比数据并展现语言多样性至关重要,环球雅思教研团队结合多年教学经验,整理出高分范文及写作技巧,帮助考生高效备考。
雅思图表作文核心要求
雅思官方评分标准对Task 1提出四项要求:
- 任务完成度(Task Achievement):准确描述图表关键信息,不遗漏重要数据。
- 连贯与衔接(Coherence & Cohesion):逻辑清晰,合理使用连接词。
- 词汇丰富度(Lexical Resource):避免重复用词,展现同义替换能力。
- 语法多样性(Grammatical Range & Accuracy):灵活运用简单句、复合句及复杂结构。
高分范文示例:动态柱状图分析
The chart below shows the changes in the proportion of energy produced from different sources in a European country between 1990 and 2010.
范文(节选):
The bar chart illustrates how the share of energy generated from five distinct sources evolved over two decades in a European nation. Overall, fossil fuels remained the dominant energy source despite a gradual decline, whereas renewables saw a marked increase.
In 1990, coal accounted for the largest proportion at 40%, followed by natural gas (30%) and oil (20%). Nuclear and renewable energy contributed merely 5% each. By 2010, coal usage had dropped significantly to 25%, while natural gas surged to 35%, overtaking coal as the primary source. Oil experienced a steady decrease to 15%. Notably, renewables tripled their share to 15%, whereas nuclear energy remained stable at 5%.
分析亮点:
- 趋势描述精准:使用“surged”“dropped significantly”“tripled”等动词突出变化幅度。
- 数据对比清晰:通过“overtaking”“followed by”等短语体现数据关系。
- 时态准确:过去时(1990年数据)与过去完成时(2010年对比1990年)结合。
静态表格题写作策略
The table compares the percentage of household spending on four categories in five countries in 2020.
高分结构:
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引言段:改写题目,概括表格核心内容。
The table provides a breakdown of household expenditure across four key sectors in five nations during 2020.
段*:提炼最显著特征(不出现具体数据)。
Food and housing constituted the largest expenses in most countries, while healthcare and education displayed considerable regional variation.* -
细节段:分组描述(如按支出高低或地域差异)。
In Japan and the UK, housing costs exceeded 30% of total spending, contrasting sharply with India’s 18%. Meanwhile, Indian households allocated over 25% of their budget to food, nearly double the figure for Canada.
技巧提醒:
- 静态数据需侧重比较而非趋势,多用“higher than”“the lowest proportion”等表达。
- 避免逐一罗列数据,按逻辑分组(如最高/最低值、相似性等)。
流程图与地图题关键要点
流程图(Process Diagram)
- 核心:使用被动语态(如“is heated”“are crushed”)和顺序连接词(“subsequently”“in the next stage”)。
- 范文片段:
First, clay is excavated and transported to a factory. Subsequently, it undergoes filtering and mixing with water before being molded into bricks.
地图题(Map Comparison)
- 核心:方位词(“northwest of”“adjacent to”)+ 变化动词(“constructed”“replaced”)。
- 范文片段:
The farmland in the southeast was converted into a residential area, and a new road was built to connect it with the industrial zone.
避免常见失分点
- 主观臆断:仅描述数据,不分析原因(如“because of economic growth”超出任务范围)。
- 数据错误:混淆“percentage”与“number”,或误读图表单位。
- 模板化表达:过度使用“as can be seen from the chart”等套句。
提升语言多样性的实用表达
- 上升趋势:climb, soar, a twofold increase
- 下降趋势:plummet, dip, a marginal decline
- 稳定状态:remain constant, stabilize at
- 占比表达:constitute, make up, account for
环球雅思建议考生平时多分析官方范文,积累高频词汇,并通过限时练习强化逻辑框架构建能力,图表作文并非单纯“翻译数据”,而是用精准语言呈现信息的能力展示,扎实掌握这些技巧,Task 1完全可以成为提分利器。