剑桥雅思12作文题目回顾 类型：议论文（Argumentative Essay） 原文：**
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
该题讨论“面对困境时应接受还是尝试改变”，属于经典的双边讨论题型。
高分范文结构与逻辑分析
以下为剑桥官方提供的范文框架，结合评分标准（TR/CC/LR/GRA）拆解：
引言段（Introduction）
- 背景句：概括社会现象，引出话题。
"People have different approaches to dealing with challenges in life, whether in their careers or personal circumstances." - 观点陈述：明确讨论双方立场。
"While some argue that acceptance is the wisest choice, others believe proactive efforts lead to better outcomes."
技巧点拨：避免模板化开头，直接切入主题，体现批判性思维。
主体段1：支持“接受现状”的论点
- 核心论点：接受现实可减少压力，避免更大风险。
"Resigning oneself to a difficult situation may reduce mental stress, as constant striving can lead to frustration." - 论据支撑：引用心理学研究或现实案例（如经济危机中保守策略的成功）。
"For instance, employees who adapt to repetitive jobs often report higher satisfaction than those persistently seeking promotions."
语言亮点：
- 动词精准：resign, adapt, report
- 衔接自然：For instance, In contrast
主体段2：支持“努力改变”的论点
- 核心论点：主动改进能创造机会，推动个人成长。
"Taking initiative to change circumstances fosters resilience and opens doors to new possibilities." - 论据支撑：举例企业家或科技创新案例（如Elon Musk突破行业局限）。
"Historically, breakthroughs in science and business were achieved by individuals who refused to accept limitations."
逻辑衔接：
- 对比词：However, On the other hand
- 因果链：This is because... Consequently...
结论段（Conclusion）
- 总结双方：重申两种立场合理性。
"Both acceptance and proactive change have merits depending on context." - 个人观点：提出折中建议，体现辩证思考。
"A balanced approach—assessing risks before acting—may be most pragmatic in real-life scenarios."
高分关键：避免绝对化结论，展示 nuanced understanding（ nuanced 理解）。
词汇与语法的高分特征
学术词汇替换
| 基础词汇 | 高分替换 |
|---|---|
| Bad situation | Adverse circumstances |
| Try | Strive / Endeavor |
| Change | Transform / Overhaul |
复杂句型运用
- 虚拟语气：
"Had individuals accepted technological limits, many inventions would not exist today." - 倒装句：
"Only by taking risks can one achieve significant progress."
避免常见错误
- Chinglish修正：
× "Accept bad situation is good for health."
√ "Accepting unfavorable conditions may benefit mental well-being."
备考策略与练习建议
- 精读范文：每周分析1-2篇剑桥范文，标注逻辑连接词与高分表达。
- 话题分类训练：将雅思常考话题（教育、环境、科技等）按类练习，积累针对性论据。
- 限时写作：Task 2严格控制在40分钟内完成，培养时间敏感度。
- 外教批改：通过专业反馈修正语法与逻辑漏洞。
