剑5作文题目解析
剑5的写作任务涵盖了两类题型：Task 1（图表题）和Task 2（议论文），以下是两道典型题目：
- Task 1：The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
- Task 2：Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others believe that teaching them to cooperate will be of more value to them in the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
分别考察数据描述能力和辩证分析能力，是雅思写作的经典题型。
Task 1高分范文解析
以剑5的图表题为例，高分范文通常遵循以下结构：
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引言段：改写题目，明确图表内容。
Example:
The line graph illustrates the percentage of people aged 65 and above in Japan, Sweden, and the USA over a century, from 1940 to 2040.
段*：总结核心趋势，不涉及细节。
Example:
Overall, all three countries experienced an upward trend in their elderly populations, with Japan projected to surpass the others by 2040.* -
细节段：分时段或分国家描述数据，突出对比。
Example:
In 1940, the USA had the highest proportion (9%), while Japan was the lowest (5%). By 2020, Sweden’s figure rose sharply to 18%, but Japan is expected to show the most dramatic increase, reaching 27% in 2040.
高分技巧：
- 避免罗列所有数据，优先选择显著变化。
- 使用比较级和连接词（e.g., whereas, in contrast）增强逻辑性。
Task 2高分范文解析
以“竞争vs合作”的议论文为例，高分范文结构如下：
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引言段：背景引入+明确讨论双方观点+个人立场。
Example:
The debate over whether children should prioritize competition or cooperation is ongoing. While competition drives individual excellence, cooperation fosters teamwork. This essay will discuss both perspectives before concluding that a balance is essential. -
主体段1：竞争的好处。
Example:
Competition motivates children to excel. For instance, academic contests encourage students to push their limits, which builds resilience and prepares them for future challenges. -
主体段2：合作的价值。
Example:
Conversely, cooperation teaches empathy and collective problem-solving. Team projects in schools demonstrate how collaborative efforts often yield better results than individual work. -
结论段：综合观点+建议。
Example:
Rather than favoring one approach, educators should integrate both skills. Competitive activities can inspire personal growth, while cooperative tasks prepare children for a society reliant on teamwork.
高分技巧：
- 使用具体例子（如PISA测试、企业团队案例）增强说服力。
- 避免绝对化表达（e.g., always, never），体现辩证思维。
语言表达提升要点
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词汇多样性：
- 替换常见词：important → crucial；increase → surge。
- 使用学术词汇：demonstrate代替show，significant代替big。
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句式灵活度：
- 被动语态：It is argued that...
- 条件句：Unless children learn to cooperate, they may struggle in group settings.
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衔接自然：
- 逻辑连接词：Nevertheless, Furthermore, On the contrary。
- 指代清晰：This trend代替重复名词。
常见错误与避坑指南
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Task 1：
- 错误：描述数据时遗漏单位（%或具体数字）。
- 改进：始终标注数据单位，如rose by 15%。
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Task 2：
- 错误：观点模糊或未充分展开。
- 改进：每段围绕一个主题句，用2-3句话支持。
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语法问题：
- 错误：主谓不一致（e.g., The government are...）。
- 改进：检查单复数，如The government is...。
